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The Hollow Crown

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Kael Veyran is nineteen, unranked, and a miner in a town that pays the levy and never sees the healer. He can draw power out of broken things, and every big draw takes one memory for good. To buy his dying sister a licensed healer he must win a rigged provincial tournament, while hiding the one art that carries a death sentence, and while an auditor from the capital closes in on the conspiracy draining his town.

The story so far

The Brace That Held (chapters 1-8)

In Ash, a mining town in the Ashen Marches, a ranked worker's seal lights amber on the ration board. Kael Veyran's lights nothing. He is nineteen and unranked, and his sister Mira has the illness that killed their mother, with no healer who will see her. The only appointment within reach is the prize for winning the Ring, a tournament open to anyone who can pay the bond. Then, deep in the Company mine, Kael finds a scraped survey plate and a beam that ticks, and no one will stop the scheduled extraction pulse. When the roof comes down, he walks back into the dust for three trapped miners and grabs a failing ward brace with his bare hands. It holds. It also takes his memory of his mother's song. At the hearing afterward, the Company hands him the bill.

Seed Sixteen (chapters 9-14)

Orin Thale, a ward-mender at a forge everyone thinks went cold, saw what Kael's hands did to that brace, and he has a name for it: Hollowing, the outlawed art of drawing the charge out of broken wards. Small draws cost a morning. Big ones take a memory for good. Kael needs the strength, because Mira's medicine has been quietly moved to the tournament's infirmary, and in thirty days it lapses. So he pays his bond and enters the Ring as seed sixteen, the unranked miner nobody expects to last a bout, drawn against seed one on the very day the medicine runs out. The Ring's sponsor, Lord Brannoch Rhyd, smiles and hopes nothing keeps Kael from a certified result. And Seren Valcrest, a probationary auditor from the capital, starts counting what the Marches would rather leave uncounted.

The First Bout (chapters 15-24)

Seed sixteen faces seed one on the day Mira's medicine lapses. Kael has studied his opponent's feet. Hollowing lends him strength and takes something every time he reaches too far, and Mira has made him promise to ask before he spends anything that is hers.

Counting the Uncounted (chapters 25-34)

Seren Valcrest's books do not add up: too many injured miners, too many sealed carts, too many broken lattices sold to the wrong buyers. Kael carries a secret the Board hangs people for. Sooner or later, an honest auditor and an outlawed miner will be counting the same thing.

The Price of a Title (chapters 35-50)

House Voss, whose champion is seeded second, says the title goes to a house, never to an empty seal. Lord Rhyd keeps smiling. The longer an empty seal survives, the more the Ring's sponsors stand to lose, and the louder the people of Ash ask who gets counted.

Under the Oldest Street (chapters 51-66)

Every lamp in Ash can ring a warning, and every warning has been ignored before. Kael has already given up memories he will never get back. Book One ends with what lies buried beneath the town, and with how much more Kael will lose to stop it.

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If you liked Cradle: progression fantasy with a slow-burn romance

The Hollow Crown is for readers who loved watching Lindon rise from Unsouled in Will Wight's Cradle and want an underdog story with the romance at its center. Kael Veyran is nineteen, an unranked miner in Ash whom nobody expects to last a bout. To get his sister Mira a healer, he has to win the Ring, a rigged provincial tournament, from the sixteenth seed.

What it shares with Cradle:

  • An underdog everyone has written off
  • A hard power system with rules you can learn
  • Tournament fights, and Kael wins each bout a different way
  • No stat screens or game system

Where it differs:

  • Kael's power, Hollowing, works only on broken things, and it is outlawed
  • Power has a permanent cost: every big draw takes a memory Kael never gets back
  • The romance is a main thread: a slow burn with Seren Valcrest, a probationary auditor from the capital (no kiss in Book One)

New to the genre? Read What is progression fantasy?

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Chapters

The first 20 chapters are free.

  1. 1The Lamps Are RingingFree
  2. 2The BargainFree
  3. 3The Scraped PlateFree
  4. 4The PulseFree
  5. 5Four KnocksFree
  6. 6What the Rubble RemembersFree
  7. 7The Empty SongFree
  8. 8The Blue CopyFree
  9. 9The Man Who KnewFree
  10. 10HollowingFree
  11. 11Second Night BellFree
  12. 12Seed SixteenFree
  13. 13The Twenty-fourthFree
  14. 14Lot NineFree
  15. 15The CrossingFree
  16. 16What the Bell SaidFree
  17. 17Raw SheetsFree
  18. 18It LapsesFree
  19. 19The PenFree
  20. 20The High ResetFree
  21. 21Last Year's Lamps20 coins
  22. 22Forty-one Marks20 coins
  23. 23Enough20 coins
  24. 24The Weather Diary20 coins
  25. 25Four Forks20 coins
  26. 26Unproven20 coins
  27. 27The Switch20 coins
  28. 28The Ring Vault20 coins
  29. 29Correlation Only20 coins
  30. 30The Second Night Bell20 coins
  31. 31The Late Latch20 coins
  32. 32Past Ten20 coins
  33. 33Five Things on a Cloth20 coins
  34. 34In Order20 coins
  35. 35The Culvert Grate20 coins
  36. 36Sixty Beats20 coins
  37. 37Day Four20 coins
  38. 38Lodged20 coins
  39. 39A Real Docket20 coins
  40. 40Mine20 coins
  41. 41Fixture Set20 coins
  42. 42Job Forty-one20 coins
  43. 43A Posted Error20 coins
  44. 44Not Dawn, Then20 coins
  45. 45The Long Arm20 coins
  46. 46Hold the Count20 coins
  47. 47The Third Step20 coins
  48. 48Anchor East20 coins
  49. 49Hostage Named20 coins
  50. 50A Ring of Nothing20 coins
  51. 51Read It Aloud20 coins
  52. 52The Lamp Is Tried20 coins
  53. 53Clear the Oldest Street20 coins
  54. 54Forty-two20 coins
  55. 55The Depositor20 coins
  56. 56I Claim It20 coins
  57. 57The Dose20 coins
  58. 58Forty-one Fours20 coins
  59. 59The Writ20 coins
  60. 60The Kettle20 coins
  61. 61The Stair20 coins
  62. 62Pass It on20 coins
  63. 63The Beam20 coins
  64. 64Count Them Out20 coins
  65. 65Face Up20 coins
  66. 66Something Answered20 coins

About The Hollow Crown

How many chapters are out?
66 chapters so far.
What is free?
Chapters 1 to 20, here and in the iPhone app, with no account needed.
What do later chapters cost?
20 coins a chapter, or read them all with Unlimited.
Is it in Unlimited?
Yes. Comicwell Unlimited ($9.99/month) opens every chapter of every series, on the web and in the app.
Is there a novel?
Yes: The Hollow Crown, the book the comic is adapted from, with the first 10 chapters free.
Who is it for?
Rated 16+: for older teens and adults.
Content note
Violence, deaths and their grief, a mine disaster, and non-explicit romance.